Beispiel aus der Angewandte Physik

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Remark 1:
Because of restrictions on the word count, this sentence should be summarized to "Here, X is a 5 × 5 matrix that characterizes the material of the body, called the elasticity matrix; its components are called elasticities or elastic constants."

Explanations

	[Explanation1]: Word Choice: “Drawing” has been replaced with an appropriate word “pulling.”
	[Explanation2]: Grammar: The preposition “of” conveys the meaning of the action accurately.
	[Explanation3]: Grammar: The definite article is required here to indicate specificity.
	[Explanation4]: Language: This sentence has been made concise and readable.
	[Explanation5]: Typographical error: The repeated article has been deleted.
	[Explanation6]: Language: This sentence has been edited to ensure that information is clear and readable.
	[Explanation7]: Formatting: As per journal guidelines, “Eq.” should be used.
	[Explanation8]: Language: This sentence has been made concise and accurate by removing redundancies and using appropriate words (“relationship” instead of “relation”).

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Beispiel aus der Angewandte Physik, lektorat beispiel

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Beispiel aus der Angewandte Physik, lektorat beispiel

Remarks

Remark 1:
Because of word count restrictions, this sentence should be summarized to "Here, X is a 5 × 5 matrix that characterizes the material of the body, called the elasticity matrix; its components are called elasticities or elastic constants."

Explanations

	[Explanation1]: Language: This sentence has been made concise and readable.
	[Explanation2]: Typographical error: The repeated article has been deleted.
	[Explanation3]: Language: This sentence has been edited to ensure that information is clear, readable.
	[Explanation4]: Language: This sentence has been heavily edited for clarity. A remark has been written to the author to check for any change in the intended meaning.
	[Explanation5]: Formatting: As per journal guidelines, “Eq.” should be used.
	[Explanation6]: Word Choice: The phrase “make sure” has been replaced with “ensure” to eliminate wordiness.
	[Explanation7]: Language: This sentence has been made accurate by removing redundancies and using appropriate words (“relationship” instead of “relation”).

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