Beispiel aus der Biochemie

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Remark 1:
This sentence should be restructured for clarity. We suggest the following rewrite: A similar series of 11 isomers that differ in their hydroxyl group position, called the L-series, is formed.

Explanations

	[Explanation1]: Article usage: The indefinite article has been added for a better introduction to the topic of discussion.
	[Explanation2]: Technical word choice: Here “hydroxyl” is the accurate terminology
	[Explanation3]: Preposition: The preposition has been corrected to ensure overall parallelism and accuracy.
	[Explanation4]: Readability and clarity: Combining two sentences makes the intended meaning clear.
	[Explanation5]: Flow and transition: The sentence has been separated for enhanced and orderly flow of information.
	[Explanation6]: Sentence structure enhancement: The sentence was edited for clarity and more technicality.
	[Explanation7]: Language correctness: Readability-This change was made for better readability.
	[Explanation8]: Technical accuracy: Discipline-specific style conventions are checked.
	[Explanation9]: English word choice: “denote” is the accurate English word choice in this context.
	[Explanation10]: Subject-specific enhancement: Any extensive sentence construction-related changes are brought to the author’s notice or suggested to the author through Remarks.
	[Explanation11]: Readability: The sentence has been edited for better readability and flow and transition.

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Beispiel aus der Biochemie, lektorat beispiel

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Beispiel aus der Biochemie, lektorat beispiel

Remarks

Remark 1:
Please check if the edited sentence conveys the intended meaning.

Explanations

	[Explanation1]: Technical word choice: A substantive edit ensures accurate terminology for better clarity.
	[Explanation2]: Flow and Transition: Here terms have been added to allow an orderly flow of information.
	[Explanation3]: Language correctness: Readability-This change was made for better readability and orderly flow of information.
	[Explanation4]: Better scientific terminology and representation: The sentence was edited for clarity and more technicality.
	[Explanation5]: Language correctness: Readability-This change was made for better readability.
	[Explanation6]: Technical accuracy: A substantive edit ensures accurate discipline-specific style conventions.
	[Explanation7]: English word choice: “denote” is the accurate English word choice in this context.
	[Explanation8]: Technical word choice: Ensuring appropriate technical word usage forms a part of substantive editing.
	[Explanation9]: Subject changes: Extensive changes made in a substantive edit are sometimes brought to the author’s notice through tags and remarks.
	[Explanation10]: Advance sentence construction: The sentence has been edited for better readability and flow and transition.
	[Explanation11]: Advance sentence construction: The sentence has been edited for better readability and flow and transition.

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