Beispiel aus der Genetik

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Remarks

Remark 1:
Please check the heavily revised sentencce for any modification of intended meaning.

Explanations

	[Explanation1]: Punctuation: Unnecessary ellipsis have been removed.
	[Explanation2]: Redundancy: Revision made for conciseness.
	[Explanation3]: Article usage: A definite article is needed here as “screening” has an indirect reference to the idea in the previous sentence.
	[Explanation4]: Readability: The sentence has been edited for better readability and flow and transition.
	[Explanation5]: Style: In American English, the abbreviations “i.e.” and “e.g.” are followed by commas.
	[Explanation6]: Grammar: American English uses “that” for restrictive clauses.
	[Explanation7]: Typographical error: The spelling error has been corrected.
	[Explanation8]: Grammar: “such as” is used to introduce examples; “like” is grammatically incorrect in this context.
	[Explanation9]: Readability: The order of words has been rearranged for readability.
	[Explanation10]: Word choice: “Continuous” is a concise synonym for “again and again.”
	[Explanation11]: Article usage: Incorrect use of the indefinite article has been rectified.
	[Explanation12]: Language: The sentence has been reconstructed for better flow.
	[Explanation13]: Language: The word order has been changed for better readability.
	[Explanation14]: Word choice: “Achieved” is a preferred formal word choice.
	[Explanation15]: Word choice: The awkward term has been revised.
	[Explanation16]: Subject area: Based on context, the terms have been revised for better representation of the implied meaning.
	[Explanation17]: Style: Spelling rectified according to the standard English style followed.
	[Explanation18]: Technical word choice: “regulatory” is the accurate terminology.
	[Explanation19]: Language: The sentence structure has been changed for clarity and consistency. Heavily revised sentences may lead to loss or change in meaning; hence, a remark has been added here for the author.
	[Explanation20]: Punctuation: A nonrestrictive “which” clause is preceded by a comma.
	[Explanation21]: Punctuation: The missing period has been added.
	[Explanation22]: Grammar: The appropriate verb form has been used.

Original Datei

Beispiel aus der Genetik, lektorat beispiel

Bearbeitete Datei

Beispiel aus der Genetik, lektorat beispiel

Explanations

	[Explanation1]: Wordiness: Unnecessary words have been deleted for economical expression.
	[Explanation2]: Logical progression: The sentence has been edited with regard to tense and voice for better readability.
	[Explanation3]: Style: The single quotes (used in British English documents) have been changed to double quotes (used in American English documents).
	[Explanation4]: Punctuation: A comma is always placed after “i.e.” in American English documents.
	[Explanation5]: Language: The appropriate plural form of the word has been used. “Which” has been replaced with “that” as per American English style convention.
	[Explanation6]: Typographical error: The spelling error has been corrected.
	[Explanation7]: Singular–Plural: Here the singular term is apt.
	[Explanation8]: Language: “such as” is used to introduce examples; “like” is grammatically incorrect in this context.
	[Explanation9]: Language: The syntax has been restructured for clarity and readability.
	[Explanation10]: Language: Two independent sentences have been restructured for enhanced flow of information.
	[Explanation11]: Language: The word order has been changed for better readability.
	[Explanation12]: Word choice: “Achieved” is a preferred formal word choice.
	[Explanation13]: Word choice: The awkward term has been revised.
	[Explanation14]: Technical change: Based on context, the terms have been revised for better representation of the implied meaning.
	[Explanation15]: Flow & Transition: Revision made for enhanced flow.
	[Explanation16]: Technical word choice: “Regulatory” is the accurate terminology.
	[Explanation17]: Word choice: “Different” is the preferred academic word choice.
	[Explanation18]: Word choice: “Evolve” is the preferred academic word choice.
	[Explanation19]: Language: This revision was made for clarity and readability.
	[Explanation20]: Subject area: Terms have been added for further clarity.
	[Explanation21]: Spacing: The extra spacing between the term is deleted.
	[Explanation22]: Grammar: The preposition has been revised for accuracy.

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