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We have edited this quote. Please insert a reference for this citation.

Explanations

	[Explanation1]: Article usage: The definite article is used with ranking adjectives, hence “the last section.”
	[Explanation2]: Language: The author is referring to a past event. The tense has been changed accordingly.
	[Explanation3]: Language: Note that “gave way” is an accurate word choice that keeps the intended meaning intact.
	[Explanation4]: Language: The common noun “art” has been changed to lowercase.
	[Explanation5]: Subject area: The discipline-specific word choice has been improved (Low Countries).
	[Explanation6]: Article usage: The definite article is required here as a specific event is being mentioned.
	[Explanation7]: Article usage: The definite article is required before a time period.
	[Explanation8]: Language: The word “renaissance” has been added here to ensure that information is clear and unambiguous.
	[Explanation9]: Style: We have followed American English in this document. Therefore, single quotes have been replaced with double quotes.
	[Explanation10]: Language: This sentence has been made formal by adding a specific subject “The term” followed by the accurate verb “was coined by.”
	[Explanation11]: Language: A normal edit ensures that information is grammatically correct and maintains the academic tone of the document.
	[Explanation12]: Language: This sentence has been edited to ensure flow and readability through transition words (“then”), appropriate word choice (“initially used”), and removing unnecessary words (“etc”).
	[Explanation13]: Grammar: The missing verb has been added.
	[Explanation14]: Content accuracy: The quote has been made accurate. This is brought to the author’s notice through a remark, which also advises the author on including references. In addition, American English usage has been kept consistent throughout the document.
	[Explanation15]: Word Choice: “Revival” is a better word choice from the meaning perspective.
	[Explanation16]: Capitalization: This adjective has been derived form a proper noun, hence capitalized.
	[Explanation17]: Language: The phrasal verb “delve into” is a better word phrase choice that brings out the implied meaning of the sentence.

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Remark 1:
The original text was unclear. Please check if the edited text conveys your intended meaning.

Remark 3:
We have edited this quote. Please insert a reference for this citation.

Remark 2:
The correct term is “rinascimento.” Please check this.

Explanations

	[Explanation1]: Language: An advance edit reconstructs sentences to ensure smooth progression of ideas, clarity in meaning, and readability.
	[Explanation2]: Language: “Art” has been added here to ensure clarity in meaning.
	[Explanation3]: Language: “Gave way” is an accurate word choice that keeps the intended meaning intact.
	[Explanation4]: Language: The common noun “art” has been changed to lowercase.
	[Explanation5]: Subject area: The discipline-specific word choice has been corrected (Low Countries).
	[Explanation6]: Grammar: The definite article is required here as a specific event is being mentioned.
	[Explanation7]: Grammar: The definite article is required before a time period.
	[Explanation8]: Clarity: This sentence has been edited for clarity. This change is brought to the notice of the author through a remark.
	[Explanation9]: Grammar We have followed American English in this document. Therefore, single quotes have been replaced with double quotes.
	[Explanation10]: Subject area: “Rinascimento” is the correct subject-matter word to use. We have inserted a remark to bring this change to the author’s notice.
	[Explanation11]: Language: This sentence has been made formal by adding a specific subject “The term” followed by the correct verb “was coined by.” In addition, the spelling error in the name has been corrected.
	[Explanation12]: Language: The subject of the sentence has been made specific to avoid any ambiguity.
	[Explanation13]: Language: An advance edit ensures that information is grammatically correct and maintains the academic tone of the document.
	[Explanation14]: Language: Readability of this sentence has been improved.
	[Explanation15]: Attention to detail: The missing period has been added to the end of the sentence.
	[Explanation16]: Grammar The missing verb has been added here.
	[Explanation17]: Content accuracy: The quote has been made accurate. This is brought to the author’s notice through a remark, which also advises the author on including references. In addition, American English usage has been kept consistent throughout the document.
	[Explanation18]: Word Choice: “Revival” is a better word choice from the meaning perspective.
	[Explanation19]: Capitalization: This adjective has been derived form a proper noun, and hence capitalized.
	[Explanation20]: Language: The phrasal verb “delve into” is a better word phrase choice that brings out the implied meaning of the sentence.
	[Explanation21]: Capitalization: “Golden Era” is a proper noun for a historical period in Europe, and hence it is capitalized.

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