Beispiel aus dem Maschinenbau

[Explanation1]: Grammar:
Introductory prepositional phrase requires a comma.

[Explanation2]: Word Choice:
A formal, academic word has replaced the phrasal verb.

[Explanation3]: Typographical error:
The incorrect spelling has been corrected.

[Explanation4]: Language:
Since this sentence is a general definition, it has been restructured for readability.

[Explanation5]: Language:
The objective nature of the definition has been implemented by changing the voice of the sentence.

[Explanation6]: Style:
Mathematical operators take spaces before and after. These have been added.

[Explanation7]: Attention to detail:
The word has been capitalized to maintain consistency.

[Explanation8]: Attention to detail:
A colon has been appropriately to use here.

[Explanation9]: Language:
“Also” has been added to enhance sentence flow of ideas.

[Explanation10]: Language:
The missing verb has been added.

[Explanation11]: Word Choice:
A better word has been used here, thereby eliminating wordiness.

[Explanation12]: Language:
This sentence has been edited to ensure that information is clear and readable. The word choice has been improved (takes considers) and a correct grammatical word (like such as) has been used. Redundancy has been removed (process).

[Explanation13]: Language:
The missing phrase has been added here for flow and readability.

[Explanation14]: Style:
Serial comma used (American English)

[Explanation15]: Language correctness:
The sentence has been enhanced with appropriate word choices and transition.

[Explanation16]: Word Choice:
A formal word has replaced the informal expression.

[Explanation17]: Attention to detail:
Unnecessary hyphens have been deleted from this term.

[Explanation18]: Language:
The phrase has been corrected for grammar (comprised of comprise) and “that” has been added for clarity and flow.

[Explanation19]: Typographical error and Language:
The typographical error has been corrected and the word “pulley” been added for clarity.

[Explanation20]: Word Choice:
An accurate, concise expression has been used here.

[Explanation21]: Language:
The awkward sentences have been made readable and formal.

[Explanation22]: Grammar:
The singular count noun “pulley” requires an indefinite article.

[Explanation23]: Language:
Redundant words have been deleted.

[Explanation24]: Language:
The sentence has been restructured for clarity and readability.

[Explanation25]: Word Choice:
Word choice has been corrected.

[Explanation26]: Grammar:
The noun phrase “single pulley system” has been mentioned earlier, hence it takes a definite article.

[Explanation27]: Grammar:
The inconsistent tense has been made correct.

[Explanation28]: Grammar:
The correct verb form has been used.

[Explanation29]: Grammar:
Incorrect preposition has been replaced.

[Explanation30]: Language:
This sentence has been edited for readability and clarity.

[Explanation31]: Language:
To enhance the flow between the previous and current sentence, a transition phrase has been added.

[Explanation32]: Typographical error:
The spelling has been corrected.

[Explanation33]: Attention to detail:
The technical word has been made consistent.

[Explanation34]: Word Choice:
The informal word choice has been made formal to suit the academic tone of the manuscript.