Beispiel aus der Molekularbiologie

[Explanation1]: Punctuation:
Because this is a question, a comma has been used to indicate a pause.

[Explanation2]: Grammar:
The definite article “the” has been added here to denote a specific event.

[Explanation3]: Technical word Choice:
Note that “RNA world hypothesis” is the appropriate technical word.

[Explanation4]: Grammar:
Here, the author is speaking of two major events “discovery of ribozymes” and “RNA world hypothesis.” There are two subjects; thus, the verb should be plural, i.e., “have.”

[Explanation5]: Language:
“Another” has been replaced with a formal word “different.”

[Explanation6]: Language:
For better flow and transition, the phrase has been placed at the beginning of the sentence.

[Explanation7]: Word choice:
From the aesthetic viewpoint, it is better to use the plural form of “enzyme.” Accordingly, the verb has been made plural.

[Explanation8]: Subject-related technical enhancement:
Note that “biological catalysts” is the more appropriate technical word.

[Explanation9]: Word Choice:
“Molecules” is the preferred formal word choice.

[Explanation10]: Language:
“Biochemical” is the more appropriate adjectival form than “biochemic.”

[Explanation11]: Accuracy:
Names of scientists have been revised for accuracy.

[Explanation12]: Flow and Transition:
The sentence has been edited for orderly flow of information and better readability.

[Explanation13]: Accuracy:
The appropriate symbol has been used consistently to adhere to the accurate spelling of the name.

[Explanation14]: Wordiness:
A substantive edit ensures verbose expressions are presented in the most concise and simplified form.

[Explanation15]: Word Choice:
Note that the word choice has been revised for readability.

[Explanation16]: Flow and Transition:
This revision has been made to ensure a logical structure and orderly flow of information within the text.

[Explanation17]: Word Choice:
A revision has been made because the word “isolated” is formal.

[Explanation18]: Word Choice:
To maintain the academic tone of the manuscript, changing has been revised to “converting.”

[Explanation19]: Subject-related technical enhancement:
"Stimulate" has been revised to "catalyze" because it is technically more appropriate this context.

[Explanation20]: Clarity:
"Active" has been added for clarity related to the subject matter.

[Explanation21]: Technical Word Choice:
A context-based word choice revision has been made accuracy among the technical terms within a document.

[Explanation22]: Clarity:
The sentence has been edited to improve its structure for better readability.

[Explanation23]: Technical word choice:
“Substrates” is the appropriate technical word in this context.

[Explanation24]: Word Choice:
“Reactions” is the correct English word choice in this instance.

[Explanation25]: Word choice:
Awkward terms have been revised for readability.